four orphan senryu
Food for Thought
four orphan senryu
miserable world
they only have each other
orphans’ circumstance
suffering children
irredeemable karma
grief, pain, misplaced hope
delightful dedication
instinctive adoration
selfless sacrifice
defenseless children
heartbreaking perseverance
mutual solace
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Written for:
February 26th – Theme: Paint the Image
Photos credits: Google Images, Author: Unknown
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Posted on February 25, 2012, in The Haiku Challenge and tagged haiku, orphan haiku, orphan misery, orphan verse, orphans suffering, senryu, sufferning, the haiku challenge. Bookmark the permalink. 15 Comments.
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“irredeemable karma” and “mutual solace” My favourite lines from your Haiku today. You paint a clear picture of these children. Thank you.
we are blessed in blindness
yet we can see
we are blessed
Peace ☮
A clear and sorrowful picture painted clearly in your poignant words.
Thank you,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
Zongrik you did it again! This set of senryu is so strong and powerful. Wonderfully crafted and painted with words.
Namaste
Oh, so sad and you’ve painted it so expertly!
heartbreaking perseverance, mutual solace …sad,sad,sad…well written, Zongrik
Nice take on the prompt….irredeemable karma, stood out for me ~
My share:
http://everydayamazin.blogspot.com/2012/02/broken.html
Excellent set for a difficult photo image … irredeemable karma of the second Haiku and the entire third one spoke to me. Thank you for sharing.
I did not have the “heart” to go with the realism of either image today …so here is my lighter Day 26.
The mutual solace really shines through in the photo, doesn’t it?
Instead of Food
Really well done.
OMG.. Once again you made me wordless.. powerful…!
Poignant and beautifully done.
That poem was certainly fitting for an AstroPoet. Great.
That’s a heart breaker. I too likes the phrase irredeemable karma.
it`s so heartbreaking,sad,sad,but good write,Tammy