Nipple Morning Aflame
Nipple Morning Aflame
Scantily-clad nymphet
too hot in summer morn
rustic downright child
not more than schoolgirl
half-baked makeup
half-heartedly splattered:
masterful
Nipple morning aflame
slight upward tilt
to stare back at you
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Written for:
Magpie Tales – Mag 150
Image credit: Daniel Murtagh
Posted on January 6, 2013, in Magpie Tales, Poetry and tagged chirbit, Daniel Murtagh, erotic poetry, Magpie Tales, nipple verse, poetics, Poetry Blogroll, poetry prompt, poetry sharing. Bookmark the permalink. 22 Comments.
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deft use of words to set the scene…i like the half play there in the middle…
it is good to see you..
smiles.
Am so happy to see an email with your name on it ! It means you are writing again !
I fell asleep reading and checking emails. When I woke up, there was your name at the top of the list ! The sleeping part is important because I was sure I couldn’t focus my sight when I saw the title of this ! I thought, “There” she got everyone’s attention ☺♥…or at least mine”
Perfect title and a lovely poem.. It hits the mark for me on each verse.
Peace and love,
Siggi
Incredible, full of sugar and spice … like the nymphet.
wonderful and descriptive-
wonderful and you caught the nymphet perfectly!
Yes, a nymphet to be sure. Your poem is sexy and tender, and shall I say, to the point.
You did catch the nymphet in this picture! Great write!
Perfect match of words and haiga. Woot woot!!
Amazing so much going on there,I think I`m sweating.
Reblogged this on delia1979.
Gday Zongrik, your words are like dancing, thanks
Where ils Nabokov when we need him..?
I like both the title and the description of the nymphet ~
Nice to see your name in the link ~
hey…great seeing you… loved the half-baked makeup and cool title as well
Just as good if read backwards. As aloof as air or a disconcerning troublemaking muse.
half baked make-up…love that. What a great title!
nice to see you back !! Well Done !!
You have captured the image well! Nymphet, indeed!
Your nymphet is charming, as is the poem.
Nipple morning aflame
slight upward tilt
to stare back at you
Sensuously beautiful. Perfect pic of a blossoming young lady learning the ropes with provocative impacts. Nice to see you back Ma’am!
Hank
You describe the little nymph well. Enjoyed reading this,
Very nice write!