Sparse Pleasant Days
Sparse Pleasant Days
memorable vibrations
might seem
hard to come by
no rehearsing
what’s to come
from passing desire
imagination fashions
miraculously
life passes furtively
dervishly twirl
till beginnings have no end
imperfections released
in sparse pleasant days
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Photo credit: Dominick Tyler in Guardian News and Media Limited “Valleys, Rivers and Waterfalls” – Friday 3 April 2009
Posted on November 15, 2011, in D’verse Poets Pub, http://sundayscribblings.blogspot.com/, imaginary garden with real toads, Monday Morning Writing Prompt, Poetry, Sunday Scribblings and tagged dervishly, dversepoets, good vibrations, imaginary garden with real toads, imagination, life is good, sunday scribblings. Bookmark the permalink. 18 Comments.
I hope your pleasant days aren’t too sparse. Very nice, twirling, piece from you.
I love this! The photo is perfect too. The title really captures the rarity of those special moments. Well done.
Wish you many fun filled days but that wild waterfall is an excellent place to get rejuvenated!!
May fun find you….and may you cherish each moment
I hope youo have many pleasant days of waterfalls and frolic, filled with love (not sparse), and although passing quickly, memorable.
beautiful piece, loved the words used.
Beautifully done!
the pic fits so nicely with the lines
I hope for more pleasant and fun days for you.
And I am grateful to meet and know you thru D’Verse. Your writing is lovely ~
It is roaring fun rumble and tumble. Not many have that luxury.Pleasant days, yes! Great verse!
Hank
love that last stanza…dancing dancing until beginnings and endings blend together…nice on the pic too…we have a waterfall we slide down in the summer…
I love your thoughts expressed here AND the picture!
sometimes it’s the sparsity which makes such days all the more valuable..and now you made me wanna take a shower under a waterfall..smiles
Sparse is a word I rarely see making its absence its very definition. I wish you more than sparse pleasant days!
vivid images, succinct choice of words.beautiful.
Thanks zongrik for passing by my blog.. Liked yours too..tight write and lovely picture
masterful,
love the vivid imagery.
Very nice. You’ve created a definite and wonderful feeling with this.