Prompt #96 “light”
Photo credit: What will happen in 2012
Six Light Love-Making Senryu
Supermoon 2012 over Athens
Six Light Love-Making Senryu
climbing high mountains
living for amazing views
breathing in light air
kiss me all night long
in the light of supermoon
it shall never fade
mercurial hearts
a three way love affair
at the speed of light
together we flee
to a private bed chamber
intimate contact
candlelight echoes
neighbors listen thorough the wall
adjacent bedrooms
angel in bright light
descending in blinding rays
delivered climax
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Posted on November 26, 2011, in Haiku Heights and tagged air, angle, athens, bedrooms, breathings, delivered, descending, haiku, Haiku Heights, kiss, light, love making haiku, love-making verse, mountatins, rays, supermoon, supermoon 2012. Bookmark the permalink. 32 Comments.
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ZONGRIK 
This is sexual in a very pure way. thanks for sharing.
very sensual. Thanks for visiting my blog.
Oh my and WOW!!
Enjoyable evening for all, including neighbors who are listening. Thanks for this delightful poem.
little do you know how true that statement can be 😉
What a lovely poem, I liked it!
Great description and sense of mood. Love that picture. I would love to stay there on top of that mountain. Thanks for sharing.
Wow,i need a cold shower! very sensual and does everybody have nosey neighbors?
lovers always try/ sacred yearning helixes/ two becoming one #haiku
These are grand! Love the one that I interpreted to be about threesomes 🙂
really, I meant that the lovers and the moon were a threesome, that moon, that view, is something to fall in love with…
Those are lovely!
The right mood, sense of sensuality … excellent.
Raunchy and joyful, all!
Intriguing. For me, the first was the best.
nice shot and poem!
Great progression here! I felt like they all worked together at least–from heights to height.
K.
An original voice..it just sort of grows is a sensual way!!
Provocative… I especially like the 2nd and 3rd.
Hi zongrik, thank you for visiting my blog.
I have read some of your posts, I very much enjoyed your poems.
Charming and erotic x
love all of these, very creatively done.
Hot! …”mercurial hearts…” and “candlelight echoes” – gorgeous! =)
Thanks for tweeting me this link. Great poem. Perhaps you would like to guest post over at Chew the Fat. This months theme is compassion. What do you think?
Either way, thanks for the inspiration.
Jeremy
Thes are all so spiritual and full of, as you intended, light! Very well done!
Nice set of haiku…full of love and nose neighbors 🙂
enjoyed all of those set with each well written
Very original and with a theme!! Some of them mildly fun like those nosy neighbours!! 🙂
I especially like the last stanza and the nieghbors listening in! Fun one.
smiles…nice…angels in the end as well…that is some climax to cause visions…smiles.
Lots to love here. Thank you. Enjoyed very much.
Peace
Siggi In Downeast Maine
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