Six Light Love-Making Senryu

Supermoon 2012 over Athens

Six Light Love-Making Senryu

climbing high mountains
living for amazing views
breathing in light air

kiss me all night long
in the light of supermoon
it shall never fade

mercurial hearts
a three way love affair
at the speed of light

together we flee
to a private bed chamber
intimate contact

candlelight echoes
neighbors listen thorough the wall
adjacent bedrooms

angel in bright light
descending in blinding rays
delivered climax


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Prompt #96 “light”

Photo credit: What will happen in 2012

About zongrik

For those of you who do not know the handle "zongrik," that would be Bat-Ami Gordin. Most people call me "Tammy." Bat-Ami means "daughter of my nation" in Hebrew. It's a heavy name to carry around. I answer to either name. I also answer to "mama." Some Basic Things about me: Animal lover, mom, poet/writer, dramatic soprano, photographer, teacher/tutor, CERT/Technician and, oh yeah, aerospace engineer. I consider myself "The Astro-Poet." To learn more about the origins of the word "zongrik" see whats-a-zongrik?

Posted on November 26, 2011, in Haiku Heights and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 32 Comments.

  1. This is sexual in a very pure way. thanks for sharing.

  2. very sensual. Thanks for visiting my blog.

  3. Enjoyable evening for all, including neighbors who are listening. Thanks for this delightful poem.

  4. What a lovely poem, I liked it!

  5. Great description and sense of mood. Love that picture. I would love to stay there on top of that mountain. Thanks for sharing.

  6. Wow,i need a cold shower! very sensual and does everybody have nosey neighbors?

  7. lovers always try/ sacred yearning helixes/ two becoming one #haiku

  8. These are grand! Love the one that I interpreted to be about threesomes 🙂

  9. The right mood, sense of sensuality … excellent.

  10. Raunchy and joyful, all!

  11. Intriguing. For me, the first was the best.

  12. Great progression here! I felt like they all worked together at least–from heights to height.


  13. An original just sort of grows is a sensual way!!

  14. Provocative… I especially like the 2nd and 3rd.

  15. Hi zongrik, thank you for visiting my blog.

    I have read some of your posts, I very much enjoyed your poems.

  16. love all of these, very creatively done.

  17. Hot! …”mercurial hearts…” and “candlelight echoes” – gorgeous! =)

  18. Thanks for tweeting me this link. Great poem. Perhaps you would like to guest post over at Chew the Fat. This months theme is compassion. What do you think?

    Either way, thanks for the inspiration.


  19. Thes are all so spiritual and full of, as you intended, light! Very well done!

  20. Nice set of haiku…full of love and nose neighbors 🙂

  21. enjoyed all of those set with each well written

  22. Very original and with a theme!! Some of them mildly fun like those nosy neighbours!! 🙂

  23. I especially like the last stanza and the nieghbors listening in! Fun one.

  24. smiles…nice…angels in the end as well…that is some climax to cause visions…smiles.

  25. Lots to love here. Thank you. Enjoyed very much.
    Siggi In Downeast Maine

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