Prompt #98 “covert”
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Three Covert Senryu
Three Covert Senryu
enfettered to state
introduced by baleful chuch
covert partnership
governing systems
shadowed before the spotlight
opaque and covert
strangest covert cloud
meandering in dark sky
supernatural
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Posted on December 10, 2011, in Haiku Heights and tagged air, angle, athens, bedrooms, breathings, delivered, descending, haiku, Haiku Heights, kiss, light, love making haiku, love-making verse, mountatins, rays, supermoon, supermoon 2012. Bookmark the permalink. 11 Comments.
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ZONGRIK 
This sounds like a very angry poem. Well written though.
Melanie
Very powerful words today. Excellent.
To the point and meaningful.
Love the line “opaque and covert”
Thank you for inspiring me…
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
Warped world.
Creative haiku set… I like the baleful church and supernatural ~
Very intense. I’m not familiar enough with the politics, but your statement is very strong. K.
Hmm.. dark,stark,leaves a lot of space for Reader to wonder.You build up effects well. 🙂
Quite piercing!!
Well done … senryu with a political touch.
Richly said with dark overtones.
haiku/senryu with political touch, I loved all three of them. you were honest and brave with your feelings, and that’s what makes your senryu poems powerful.