Five Prop Door Senryu
Five Prop Door Senryu
neighbor’s door ajar
welcomes all this bright new year
sympathetic home
neighbors loud music
recommence contemplation
when one shuts the door
the living room ghost
floated past the fireplace
i ran toward the door
someone closed the door
i am dying for fresh air
chokingly dusty
through welcoming doors
obdurate misconception
extract from darkness
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haiku my heart of a new bright year
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Photo Credit: Bat-Ami Gordin © 2011 all rights reserved, credit if you use it, please.
Posted on December 31, 2011, in haiku my heart, Poetry, wordless wednesday and tagged darkness, door, door senryu, door verse, dusty, fresh air, ghost verse, haiku, haiku my heart, loud music, neighbor, open door policy, senryu. Bookmark the permalink. 6 Comments.
Powerful! haiku ~ Great photo ~ Happy New Year ~ Carol (A Creative Harbor)
The door of hope always remains open, happy new year to you.
Sue x
I enjoyed those senryu!
Happy New Year! And thanks for all your fun contributions to my 2011 Limerick-Offs!
Not surprisingly, the one I just posted has a New Year’s theme.
Well, it proves again that doors are important !
Thanks for your visit.
Hello Zongrik! 🙂
Thats an awesome poem! 🙂
And guess what … I’ve nominated you for the Candle Lighter Award! 🙂
http://kweschn.wordpress.com/2011/12/31/liebster-and-candle-lighter-blogs/
Your poems always make me smile and ponder! 🙂
Happy 2012!!
Cheers,
So many interpretations of doors…welcoming, closing us out…letting in the light…
happy new year!