bumble bee
bumble bee
Rhode Island Bumble Bee Nest
bumble bee
buzzing
fluttering
flipping
murmuring
whipping
bumping –
splat
whooshing
whirring
rustling
zooming
zipping
zinging –
zap
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Posted on January 8, 2012, in D’verse Poets Pub, Poetry and tagged bee, bee nest, bumble bee, bump, buzz, cobra pest control, dversepoets, flip, flutter, murmer, onomatapeia, onomatopoeia, splat, swosh, zing, zip, zoom. Bookmark the permalink. 22 Comments.
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ha nice…makes me yearn for summer and a flower field with lots and lots of bumble bees…smiles
ohhhh for someone sensitive to bee stings ….made me itch …but loved it thank you x x
Ha. Very vivid. K.
Bumblebees! Perfect for the prompt and well done… I especially like splat. lol
I love this, Zongrik! I’ve seen it happen just like that! Excellent write!
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eek…had a swarm of these suckers get me as a child….not a lot of fun…but you capture well their buzzing chaos…
fun buzzing sounds here….happy day ~
Has a great zing to it. Thank you.
funny words are full of the lines, well done.
Vivid and humorous. Thanks. My poem: http://verseinanutshell.wordpress.com/2012/01/08/count-on/
oh, I love it. perfect play with some great onomatopoeias!
That’s one gnarly looking bee hive! You described the sounds perfectly–I hate the “zapping” part!
Buzzing. good description.
Very good,and such a” sweet” thing to write about…..busy-buzz-buzz
great fun! ♥
We need lots of bees! great sounds-thanks for visiting.
lol! reminds me of the bees out here in the summertime and how I have to play dodge ’em with the little buggers 🙂 Good one Zongrik!! Grins, Terri
Just read your poem about the hawk and dog–you nailed the crazy-clumsy persona of a bumblebee just as clearly here–and with hardly anything but sound words. Really cool. I love watching these guys try to make it from flower to flower without hitting something–and they really don’t handle a sprinkler well.
Gee, this is just great! Loved the cadence.
Ah, yes! buzz, zap and zoom! Perfect piece.
z is for zongrik
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Hello.
LOL…this was fun!
Thanks for sharing.
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