Four Tiptoe Senryu
Alan Bean's "Tiptoeing on the Ocean of Storms" (acrylic on masonite)
Four Tiptoe Senryu
who dared to tiptoe
on the rugged lunar plains
as we gaped in awe
when you have migranes
count twenty tiptoing sheep
pounding ceases
all is so quiet
tiptoe when the sun begins
sleeping roommates
singing the blues
tiptoing though their stories
i live their passion
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Written for:
Prompt #103 “tiptoe”
Picture credit: Alan Bean: Painting Apollo, First Artist on Another World
Posted on January 22, 2012, in Haiku Heights, Poetry and tagged alan bean, blues haiku, blues senryu, counting sheep verse, haiku, Haiku Heights, head aches, lunar, lunar haiku, lunar senryu, lunar verse, lunar walk, moon, passion, senryu, sheep, sheep haiku, sheep senryu\, sheep verse, singing the blues, sky, tiptoe. Bookmark the permalink. 11 Comments.
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ZONGRIK 
Very nice! I especially like the one about the roommates! And the sheep! And the moon! They are all fun. K.
I get migraines and appreciated the reference to sheep tiptoeing;-) Thanks!
love all of them…the last one is my favorite. I love Blues music
Very nice x 4… I think if I had to choose…migraines first, then the moon !
Thank you.
Peace,
Siggi in Downeast Maine
I enjoyed these and especially loved the image of tiptoeing sheep!
And thanks for your fun contribution to last week’s LImerick-Off!
These are really fun! I’m going to have to try counting tiptoeing sheep.
I’ll have to remember that next time I have a migraine (which I hope is never).
Your ‘tiptoes’ are all great!
very nice..
lov your tiptoes.
so very cool…nice tiptoe through several scenes…live their passion, i am all for it…