four craft of music senryu
four craft of music senryu
vibrating objects
forged musical instruments
transcendental craft
alone at the keys
music flows through her digits
discernible air
soothing diversion
music triggers sanity
consciousness
flashback to music
smoothly floating melody
harmonic journey
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Written for:
This week’s theme is: Craft
Also posted on:
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Image Credit : AtmoSAFE.net
Posted on February 4, 2012, in Haiku Heights, haiku my heart, Poetry, Sensational Haiku Wednesday and tagged craft, craft haiku, craft senryu, craft verse, crafting musical instruments, haiku, Haiku Heights, haiku my heart, music, musical instrument haiku, musical instrument senryu, musical instrument verse, musical instruments, senryu, Sensational Haiku Wednesday, soothing diversion. Bookmark the permalink. 12 Comments.
How about sonic air sculptures…
Are the 3rd and 4th verses the same?
I like the flowing music in the air ~
yeah, i fixed it. thank you very much. most people would not do that. too many people are afraid of saying anything negative.
It certainly is a transcendental craft. nice one.
I enjoyed these very much. The last two spoke to me … I do not play an instrument…but the first two gave me meaningful insight.
Thanks,
Peace
Siggi in Downeast Maine
perfectly built up story, loved your haiku.
Beautiful musical senryu! 🙂
“transcendental craft”–what a power-filled line!
Yes to the Music
the third is my favorite 🙂
Hi Zongrik, thanks for visiting our site http://www.atmosafe.net. The picture you credited us for is not ours, but was bought from istockphoto. You better remove it from your site, otherwise you might get into trouble (not from us). Nice poem btw.
transcendental … indeed!!!
love the last verse.