elephant slave
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elephant slave
she is at my back
talking to my shoulder
bubbly in the morning
yet she mourns
bereaved family
lamentations
disaster
uncontrolled loss
yet the world
has lost its sorrow
and i am told
she will bounce back
tears will cease
with formula
and copious
vegetation
degradation
never forgets
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Written for:
Kerry’s Wednesday Challenge
Also Posted on:
The Poetry Pantry Is Now Open! – # 86
Also posted on:
E is for Easy
Photo credit: geeeo on – George Nova on Deviant Art
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Posted on February 10, 2012, in ABC wednesday, Animal, elephant, imaginary garden with real toads, Poetry, Poetry Blog Roll and tagged abc wednesday, animal protection, animal rights, animal rights verse, elephant, elephant verse, geeeo, geeeo on deviantart, imaginary garden with real toads, poetry blog roll. Bookmark the permalink. 16 Comments.
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I want more…
It is well written and leaves me pondering~
Very sad:(
Very expressive and full of passion! Lovely!
this makes me so sad! really amazing! LOVE it! ♥
Absolutely fantastic!! Thanks for all you do,awesome job!
wow.. this is so good..
Indeed, what we do to these creatures who have every right to be here alongside of us shows who and what we are and, we are far from being civillised. Some of the most beautiful creatures have been slaughtered, caught and ‘tamed’ to work for us. This hits home for its deepest truths.
I want one!
I LOVE your take on this picture. Resonate with the degradation and bereavement, yet love the hopeful turn of “the world has lost its sorrow and she will bounce back”. Beautiful writing. By the way I LOVE the name “daughter of my nation”. What a fantastic name to carry.
You could definitely see your skills in the work you write. The world hopes for even more passionate writers like you who aren’t afraid to say how they believe. At all times follow your heart.
visitors never stay too long…but the scars may linger….I like the “words” here…..
Peace
Lovely
I’ve become fascinated by elephants. Much more intelligent that we thought, and EMPATHETIC.
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
Nice one.
E is for Entertainment, please come and see.
Lets hope the elephant survives us. Thoughtful poem.
Joy, ABC Team
the wooly mammoth didn’t survive us. things look bleak. this might help bring elephants to australia”