disembodied spheres
Abstract 02 (From the Musee d Orsay series) by Walter W Smith
disembodied spheres
disembodied spheres, contiguous to contradictory
aspects of reality ― inviolable trans-empirical congeners.
abstractly marginal concepts run swiftly in
dysfunctional Rodentia brains silently breaking moonlight.
self-causation. incantation. ordination. reassertion
incandescent power. scintillating siren speaks apostolically.
barrel-jammed full of exo-bizzare causal continuity.
extrasensory existentialist momentary causality
innervates gaudy uniqueness that knows no bounds.
encapsulation. detonation. postulation. misdirection.
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Sheila Moore was to write a poem about how the art of Walter W Smith speaks to Us.
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Posted on March 3, 2012, in D’verse Poets Pub, Poetry and tagged abstract, abstract art, abstract art verse, abstract digital art, abstract painting verse, art, digital art, digital photography, dVerse Poets Pub, dversepoets, newdigitalscapes, online poetry, photography, poetics, poetry prompt, sheila moore, spheres, Tagspoetry, walter w smith, Writing. Bookmark the permalink. 13 Comments.
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i like how your play on the kind of abstract combination here with disembodied spheres…the whole poem mirrors for me the rather surreal piece of art..nice..
kabow…consider my mind blown….lol
abstractly marginal concepts run swiftly in
dysfunctional Rodentia brains silently breaking moonlight
yep went right on out…smiles…love how you make complex concepts dance…
wicked flow…
fascinating take on the photo. Your terminology flows abstractly/without bounds. very suiting for the prompt. I like it!
I’m with Brian. My brain just went ..ka boom. There is so much intricacy, subtle, abstract yet so very clever too ( from what I understand of it) makes sense. It is fascinating.
The picture and words matched…nice take on the abstract art ~
it was as if this image was created for your words to it, wonderful pen ~ Rose
“barrel-jammed full of exo-bizzare causal continuity.” …excellent !!!
there is art to abstract wordsmithery…you have done well here
Peace ☮
Love the alliterations; some mind-blowing lines too; and the ease with which your rhythm carries some pretty heavy concepts is impressive.
“extrasensory existentialist momentary causality
innervates gaudy uniqueness that knows no bounds”
This is just brilliant! Love the abstract flow of this poem and the alliteration.
I have to say Tammy, I enjoyed this poem with great passion. My girlfriend said I had to describe at least one post as … “Oh, that was too deep” … and Tammy that expression is certainly reserved for your poem. I love it. It flows with my piece with such “extrasensory existentialist momentary causality.” Isn’t that what we are trying to achieve when we create art? Is it not a possession that we long for? Can we not trust in that mystery and let abstract say what it must?
Beautiful is it not….
You definitely caught the spirit of abstraction of the art. Your wordplay, as always, just so enjoyable with its interplay between denotation and connotation. The objective lens you project onto this piece, refocusing it from inside out, calls to mind the panoptic sphere that’s celebrated so widely among realists.
Fascinating whirlwind of vocab. I agree you captured abstract art. 🙂
I agree– very deep– I love it when the scientific mind and the poetic come together as they ably do in this poem. xj