exciting haiku/senryu

Soaring with the Eagles

exciting haiku/senryu

most exciting day
birds float in warm spring breezes
hoping they can mate

angry and happy
multi-excitable state
constant turbulence

constant excitement
easily agitated
living together


Written for:

Sensational Haiku Wednesday

This week’s theme is:   Excite

Photo Credit: Naomi Gray Bird’s Eye View – postcards from paradise

About zongrik

For those of you who do not know the handle "zongrik," that would be Bat-Ami Gordin. Most people call me "Tammy." Bat-Ami means "daughter of my nation" in Hebrew. It's a heavy name to carry around. I answer to either name. I also answer to "mama." Some Basic Things about me: Animal lover, mom, poet/writer, dramatic soprano, photographer, teacher/tutor, CERT/Technician and, oh yeah, aerospace engineer. I consider myself "The Astro-Poet." To learn more about the origins of the word "zongrik" see whats-a-zongrik?

Posted on March 14, 2012, in Haiku Heights, You Know that Blog and tagged , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 11 Comments.

  1. Great ! captured the moment.

    Siggi in Downeast Maine

  2. Excellent!!

  3. “easily agitated
    living together”

    Not a good state for birds or humans. 🙂

  4. those can apply to nature and happy hour! and marriage =)
    great work!

  5. magicalmysticalteacher

    Hmm…I guess people are like eagles: They get excited about the prospect of mating too! 🙂

    Fevered Excitement

  6. Emotional haiku ~ well done ~thanks, namaste, Carol ^_^

  7. A lovely write! It’s spring!

  8. Love your Haiku. The last one is my favourite.

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