lunar effects
Romantic Couple in Paradise Landscape
lunar effects
lunar luminescence wraps
surrounding
such a thing unnoticed
such a thing untouched
lunar drama draws
shaking
kiss soft as wind
kiss flimsy as fragrance
lunar tide pulls
dizzying
part of any season
part of a motif
lunar mask hides
laughing
feasible rejection
feasible betrayal
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Written for:
Short Story Slam Week 21 (March 14-25)
The challenge was to write a short story or a poem in exactly 55 words.
Image Credit: google.com
Posted on March 14, 2012, in http://bluebellbooks.blogspot.com/, Poetry and tagged bluebell books, love poetry, lunar poetry, lunar verse, Short Story Slam. Bookmark the permalink. 5 Comments.
Verification wastes my time, and often doesn't work. I am going to stop commenting on pages that require verification one of these days.
ZONGRIK 
The last stanza gives this an air of mystery and question.
http://charleslmashburn.wordpress.com/2012/03/14/running-blind/
The last stanza gives this the ouch factor!
Wander
Hello.
Love the word “luminescence”. Nice imagery & flow until I felt the sting of the end. Thanks for sharing & visiting. Thanks also for NO VERIFICATION! 🙂
Thoughts Of Beauty In The Stillness Of Dawn…
It was romantic all the way through until the end and then it reminds us to be careful of falling in love on vacation, because it may not be the real thing. The moonlight and the walks on the beach can sometimes fool you into thinking it’s the real thing.
http://elizena-lovingmycreator.blogspot.com/2012/03/in-moonlights-vision.html
Kiss flimsy as fragrance……..what a fabulous line and thought.