three deserted senryu


Deserted House

three deserted senryu

deserted night beat
music lost in haunted wind
quiet city street

old discarded tricks
deserted magic venue
haunted theater

deserted snow falls
white covered fishing village
all remain housebound

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Written for:

Prompt #114 – deserted

Image Credit: Bat-Ami Gordin  © 2012 all rights reserved, credit if you use it, please. If interested in vector graphics form, please contact me.

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For those of you who do not know the handle "zongrik," that would be Bat-Ami Gordin. Most people call me "Tammy." Bat-Ami means "daughter of my nation" in Hebrew. It's a heavy name to carry around. I answer to either name. I also answer to "mama." Some Basic Things about me: Animal lover, mom, poet/writer, dramatic soprano, photographer, teacher/tutor, CERT/Technician and, oh yeah, aerospace engineer. I consider myself "The Astro-Poet." To learn more about the origins of the word "zongrik" see whats-a-zongrik?

Posted on April 1, 2012, in Haiku Heights and tagged , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 11 Comments.

  1. I like all three…
    the unusual topics that are so “usual”
    my favorite lines:

    “deserted night beat
    music lost in haunted wind”

    Lovely,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

  2. Descriptive and vibrant! Especially dramatic is the first line!

  3. I like these three very much, my favorite being the first one and also the line “haunted theatre” I have been in a haunted theatre myself 🙂 Thank you.

  4. All good and very evocative. I especially liked the magic one.

  5. All are different.. loved them.. RS:)

  6. you are a pro at haiku..grt job!!

  7. magicalmysticalteacher

    Your first senryu reminds me so much of Robert Frost’s poem “Acquainted With the Night.” If you’re not familiar with it, look it up. I think you’ll be surprised at the similarities.

    Deserted Branches

  8. Well done ~ 2nd one speaks to me the most ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

  9. Three great takes on the prompt. The first is my fave.

  10. Good day Zongrik, what a lovely read. Nicely written triplet of haiku.

  11. i like it,right off the first set.

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