dark night, red light
Sargent, John Singer, A Dinner Table at Night, 1884
dark night, red light
dark night
red light
saxophone hums
days of films
nights of jazz
steady neon haze
simple-role playing
it’s a date
plan the air
thicken the stage
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Hear this
on chirbit
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Posted on August 5, 2012, in ABC wednesday, Magpie Tales, Poetry and tagged a dinner table at night, abc wednesday, dead crows, dead ravens, John Singer Sargent, Magpie Tales, new year verse, New Year's Eve Poetry, new Year's eve verse, new years, new years eve, poetry prompt, saxophone music verse, writing prompt. Bookmark the permalink. 32 Comments.
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you really caught the mood in this painting.
a little role playing can lead to quite the excitement you know…smiles.
Haha… and what else were they going to get up to in the dark, sultry night, I wonder. Reminded me of New Orleans for some reason. (The Jazz maybe)
The ambience is perfect, just lead the way! Great write Tammy!
Hank
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Oh, yes. Straight out of a 1940’s / ’50s set. Smokin’!
You set the mood well. I enjoyed hearing you read it too!
cool and jazzy.
I like the thicken the stage….you captured the mood of this ~
I liked both the painting and poem … with voice. And yes, nothing like a late night at a jazz club. Sax … Coltrane anyone?
Coltrane would be perfect. I love the “mood indigo” you’ve created here, Zongrik. (Duke Ellington). Sounds like a night out! Thank you for sharing this. =D
I like this ” planning the air ” concept, Zongreco !
I like it … especially the “jazz.” I did a painting (1963) once titled “The 5 Spot.” The 5 Spot was Thelonius Monk’s place in the Viilage. My painting was abstract done in reds and purples. You words make me think of it.
I love that you included music…. “saxophone hums” Sounds so soothing
Loved hearing you read it…also loved how you heard music in the painting…Nice work!
I love “plan the air, thicken the stage”…
I can hear the saxophone…
=)
Ths captured a mood hinted at by the painting, but transposed into a later time of red lights. jazz, saxophones. Well done.
…and what an interesting stage it is I’m know! I can even hear the music flowing….
Oh, oh, oh I enjoyed this! Could sink right into the mood, the music, the night.
Nice. Mood, phrasings, the tech you used to bring it all to life…I enjoyed it♫
Want to snap my fingers.
ROG, ABC Wednesday team
Very rich and dramatic.
Romantic. Catching up With ABC.
Daredevil Diva
Rose, ABC Wednesday Team
Sargent’s paintings are certainly memorable. Kate, ABC team
great write – I could see, hear and feel the entire day….
Oh, very classy scenery. 🙂 I felt like I was in an Audrey Hepburn film.
I like this so much. Carver, ABC Wed. Team
Simple and nice.
Dear friend,
You are a very talented writer. You touched my emotions. Thanks for sharing.
Such a pretty painting. So realistic… I love it
Cool sophistication …..
You really ‘wove the mood’ so effectively. (I sometimes enjoy listening to smooth jazz when I write.) Peace! 🙂
I like this alot! Can hear it…loud and clear and neon!