to enslave with domestication
to enslave with domestication
it is always superficial, caused by humans without gumption.
their hearts are frozen. their dysfunctionality, contagious.
i am preoccupied with difficulties. the air is too cold.
with temerity i shiver. the communal sun radiates not on me.
a treasure from my mother might be a memory of times past.
it’s a species thing. natural. days of wretched misery.
hours of dolorous suffering. i am stabbed by unblunted thorns.
calluses form as if I were to transmute into an uncultivated cactus.
i question the distress in the experience of humanity:
to savor. to self-reflect. to engage in life with exactitude.
to appraise with attitude. to enslave with domestication.
i stare with solemnity, “is protection around the corner?”
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Written for:
Magpie Tales – Mag 190
Also posted on:
Open Link Night ~ 107
Image credits: Unknown, from Magpie tales page
Posted on October 13, 2013, in Animal, D’verse Poets Pub, Dogs, Magpie Tales, Poetry and tagged abandoned, abandoned dog, abandoned dog verse, animal, animal protection, animal rights, canine, canine poetry, canine verse, dog, dog poetry, dog verse, dVerse Poets Pub, dversepoets, Magpie Tales, online poetry, pet, pet poetry, pet verse, poetics, Poetry & Prompts, poetry prompt, poetry sharing, writing prompt. Bookmark the permalink. 14 Comments.
Humans without gumption, indeed…nice to see you at Magpie!
enslave with domestication—fine phrase.
whew…a rough life eh? there is a downside of domestication…a sunjugation of the will of another to that of another….even if in the name of protection….
he deserves much better. Well done!
A bit wise, a bit witty. Well done.
Dysfunctionality is sadly contagious. Nicely done. Thank you.
Sad….Excellent writing!
doggy tales
Gday Zongrik , great to see ya, yeah, it can be a dogs life !
But i wouldnt swap it for quids
Excellent write. Poor fella – enslaved he is.
Anna :o]
I enjoyed your piece along with the reading via SoundCloud.
Lovely work! Loved the photo too. So sad.
Sophisticated writing, 3D reading!
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sad very sad,it makes a thought to me.but great write I see.