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Notes From A Metro Line
Dverse poets asked us to write about what we learnt or felt about times that have gone from Darkness to the Light. Since tomorrow is the anniversary of 9-11, I decided to write a poem about the destruction of the subway, a rather dark place, even when there aren’t terrorist attacks. However, since WTC came down, the MBTA station has been rebuilt and is quite a bright and beautiful place.
Notes From A Metro Line
fragile arcs caught by gleaming hues
weave magic, elude sight.
silver crowned unicorns
curl on incoming rainbow,
decamp south
to lodge from journeys end,
awake from oblivion,
like jewels on an inanimate face.
embittered minutemen
on the express, caress collision.
metropolitan heroes
crushed on rush hour train,
breathe the stench
of another’s warm lunch sandwich,
slick lettuce curled,
no time for consumption.
subway spray overlays
vacuous white non-visaged,
empty headed faces forward —
flutter in spiritual positions
most humans occupy these days.
on the intimate horizon,
though a dark pane,
a plethora of iridescent
glow-in-the-dark paint splatter
stupefies artistic vision.
green ocean spray choreography
river snakes unnoticed,
stealing along shiny park grass,
through faux city boulevards
dumped beyond urban walls.
as we ride the rattle can,
angels fly in masterpieces
strewn around fairy tale readings
found in museums above.
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Poetics–Bringing Light to Darkness
Image credits: wikepedia entry World Trade Center (MBTA station) and North Shore Journal Article September 11 – photos to remember that day
alive on subway senryu
alive on subway senryu
space feels close to hell
rumbling underground death-trap
did not plunge today
public platform
exacerbating delays
softening subway
speeding through tunnels
boundary between two spots
modern convenience
people feel alive
navigating city streets
defying traffic
exist on subway
surrounded by city folk
heading to their homes
routine daily nap
wake-up at destination
good use of subway
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Written for:
Poetics: New view for you
Prompt, by @cmschoenfeld, was to “have some fun and write subway poems.”
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