renal test

May 5

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Things That Make You Feel Unique

renal test

rectal thermometer
pressurized barometer
hazy spectrometer

self-checking
incontinence
storage of leakage

it’s a luxury
without anxiety
renal system test

positive reactions?
suspect contamination?
male pregnancy?

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Written for:

Magpie Tales – Mag 115

Photo Credit:  Manu Pombrol

About zongrik

For those of you who do not know the handle "zongrik," that would be Bat-Ami Gordin. Most people call me "Tammy." Bat-Ami means "daughter of my nation" in Hebrew. It's a heavy name to carry around. I answer to either name. I also answer to "mama." Some Basic Things about me: Animal lover, mom, poet/writer, dramatic soprano, photographer, teacher/tutor, CERT/Technician and, oh yeah, aerospace engineer. I consider myself "The Astro-Poet." To learn more about the origins of the word "zongrik" see whats-a-zongrik?

Posted on May 5, 2012, in Magpie Tales, Poetry and tagged , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 16 Comments.

  1. Daydreamertoo | May 5, 2012 at 3:02 pm

    LOL..and why not!
    Great interpretation of the pic 🙂

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  2. Helen | May 5, 2012 at 3:16 pm

    Oh my! Your guy needs my vinotherapy ~ for sure! Like what you did with the image!!

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  3. Mama Zen | May 5, 2012 at 4:51 pm

    That’s hilarious!

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  4. tigerbrite | May 5, 2012 at 4:52 pm

    YUK
    hope he is ok?
    Reminds me of hospitals, not pleasant memories.

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  5. versebender | May 5, 2012 at 5:29 pm

    Funny…definitely weird….but very funny and creative! Good work. Vb

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  6. susan m hinckley | May 5, 2012 at 7:39 pm

    hahahaha! thanks for a smile to go with this image — LOVED your take on this

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  7. David King | May 6, 2012 at 3:17 am

    Surprising, if obvious, take on the prompt! Brave too! Well crafted. Like it very m uch.

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  8. Raven | May 6, 2012 at 7:33 am

    Oh my goodness, this was a delight and completely unanticipated!

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  9. Abin | May 6, 2012 at 12:31 pm

    hilariously surprising take on the picture.and yes, I just turned word verification off.thanks.

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  10. Eileen T O'Neill | May 6, 2012 at 1:47 pm

    I do not understand the context of your ‘comment’ left at my poem. All I can say is thank goodness for word verification.

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  11. Myrna | May 6, 2012 at 2:25 pm

    Ha. I have a great smile on my face now. Thanks. This is so cute and funny. You have a wild imagination.

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  12. Sweet Pea | May 6, 2012 at 10:54 pm

    this made me smile =P

    he might be a little bit paranoid…..

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  13. Karen | May 7, 2012 at 9:37 am

    A unique take on the prompt!

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  14. knightsheart | May 7, 2012 at 3:28 pm

    Talk about a pain in the…
    Ouch !
    Great probing poem

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  15. Kim Nelson | May 9, 2012 at 1:44 pm

    You surely made me ponder, reconsider, modern medicine.

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  16. Trellissimo | May 10, 2012 at 7:28 am

    All rather yuk sounding! LOL

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