Monthly Archives: December 2011
Five Prop Door Senryu
Five Prop Door Senryu
neighbor’s door ajar
welcomes all this bright new year
sympathetic home
neighbors loud music
recommence contemplation
when one shuts the door
the living room ghost
floated past the fireplace
i ran toward the door
someone closed the door
i am dying for fresh air
chokingly dusty
through welcoming doors
obdurate misconception
extract from darkness
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haiku my heart of a new bright year
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ARTMUSEDOG – WORDLESS WEDNESDAY
Photo Credit: Bat-Ami Gordin © 2011 all rights reserved, credit if you use it, please.
Last Day of the Last Year
Last Day of the Last Year
on the last day, of the last year
we will wait at dusk in awe and fear
the cold sky colors will become too warm
the clouds will begin to take strange form
naysayers have predicted a year of gloom
so we will run for shelter in a hidden room
to live inside ourselves each day
where we will not watch those news-casts play
we will wonder what will come to pass
beyond the plains, and dried out grass
our tides might flood the shores and banks
armies might deploy lasers on their tanks
but who’s to say it will be bad
that we will become raving mad
they say the planets will align
but it could be just seven, not all nine
if this coming year, truly is last
if our futures have already been cast
then the last year, is also rebirth
resulting in a much better earth
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Posted for:
Poetics: FormForAll – Couplets for the New Year
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Also posted on: Wordless Wednesday
Picture Credit: Bat-Ami Gordin © 2011 all rights reserved, credit if you use it, please.
Spoiler Alert
For today’s liv2write2day’s Blog Fiction, Poetry and Writing Prompts, Victoria wrote, “As we approach the end of the year and the beginning of another, a theme inspires me: endings.”
She went on to assign, and here, I have blended some of her choices, “Write a poem or a piece of short fiction about an ending/write a poem with a surprise ending.”
I have been watching Boardwalk Empire, and thought I could…well, if I told you, it would be a spoiler alert to the spoiler alert, so, read the story, and you will probably figure out how I got this idea.
Spoiler Alert
As he read, she stood over his shoulder, undaunted, grinning. As he read the last few paragraphs, he started shaking his head, for he sensed what was to come.
“Throughout the acclaimed series, I debated whether the style was Jacobean or Elizabethan. As I attempted to properly label the dramatic style, each episode, nay, each scene, brought me back and forth, like an amusement park The Pirate Ship ride. My mind maneuvered, like an Aston Martin in an early Bond movie. Clearly, there were aspects of The Godfather that were parallel to both Macbeth and the Henry IV trilogy. Undoubtedly, any given episode maintained characteristics of The Revenger’s Tragedy.
“As a connoisseur of award winning television drama, I was seduced into watching two full seasons back to back. The opening of the stylish, expressionist, HBO period piece, was directed by Martin Scorsese himself.
“Finally, as I salivated over the virtuosity of the final episode of the second season, I could concede to only one formal designation: Greek Tragedy.
“Of course, within the voluminous works of that era, only one work parallels. Thus, the spoiler alert of the week: Boardwalk Empire is the most Oedipal of all contemporary dramatic works ever to…”
He stopped reading. Her smile faded, “What? Is it that bad? Too over the top English-major? What?”
“No,” he kissed her on the forehead. “this is your best writing ever, well, at least for your Spoiler column. Hon, I don’t know how to tell you this, but, that wasn’t the end, it wasn’t the last episode, it was second to last.”
“OH!” replied the loquacious English Major, “oh.”
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Photo Credit: © HBO 2011
Poetics-Endings & Beginnings
Five Senryu of Review
Five Senryu of Review
review your email
after a long vacation
so much nasty junk
December morning
review important events
before it’s too late
review your routine
be proud of your commitments
else adjust your days
count your sheep at night
review your accounts by day
don’t mix the numbers
clean your minds thoughts
banish negativity
balanced brainpower
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Written for:
This week’s theme is: Reveiw
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In Tandem #18
One Single Impression – Prompt 20: Renewal
Executive Take Over Limerick
Executive Take Over Limerick
A young bureaucrat stepped on some toes
when some changes he did dare to propose.
He reorganized his wing
then revised every thing
now he sits where had past CEOs.
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Written for: Limerick-Off Monday Dip Your Toes In Limericks
Photo credit: CartoonStock
ornamented joshua
ornamented joshua
stout gymnospermous? Yucca brevifolia bedecked with trinkets! does it make a difference when it's time to celebrate?
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I found this on Dawn Road, in Rosamond, CA 93560, USA
Coordinates – 34° 54′ 12″ N 118° 09′ 51″ W
Some people might refer to this as the middle of nowhere.
Posted and written for:
dVerse Christmas
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Picture Credit: Bat-Ami Gordin © 2011 all rights reserved, credit if you use it, please.
loose collars
loose collars
a cracked face caught in a laugh
looming in one hundred years of nocturnal love
the pictures were the attraction
we forgot to breath
as our fingers were extended
i love the taste of a miracle
and put it in the back of a soup
immersing it in status quo
i spent too much on energy
proliferating here and there
frustrated in the sweetest pain
extending fingers in melodic hum
at the door of ecstasy
the world expanded
when i loosened my collar
negligent criminals
betrayed their friends
and forgot to breathe
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Written for:
A Word with Laurie
Write a poem with the word “ecstasy” in it
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ABC WEDNESDAY – L
Image Credit: Classic Star Trek Women – Yeoman Smith
Four Spirit Senryu
Four Spirit Senryu
it’s not how you dress
recognize your inner self
push the envelope
souls that met by chance
kindred spirits tied by night
random encounters
body in stillness
hovering spirit above
constant loneliness
only knowing love
fasinating spirit guides
lead us through life
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Written for:
This week’s theme is: Spirit
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Poetic Forms : HAIKU (Week 4, A Repost)
Photo Credit: Angel Sky Unlimited
why celebrate the holidays
why celebrate the holidays
why celebrate the holidays
in a tree
when you can ride a pumpkin
and scuff its pungent crust
why celebrate the holiday
with family
when you can sip ginger tea
while burning a cinnamon candle
why celebrate the holiday
and succumb to gravity
when you can pirouette on point
with the rat king
why celebrate the holiday
traveling by sea
when warm colored leaves
gamble their lives in the wind
why celebrate the holiday
in thoughtful study
when you can play with words
in creative fulfillment
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Also Written for:
Open Link Monday – December 19, 2011
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Image Credit: Chance of Sunshine: Cinderella On Her Tea Break
Red-eyed White Rabbits

IN 2004 over 260,000 laboratory rabbits, and some 43 percent of those individuals were subjected to tests that caused pain, distress, or both, sometimes without any drug relief.
Red-eyed White Rabbits
Pickled snake skin with dehydrate rat bone. Red-eyed white rabbits with broken upper ribs. Spotless does in comas. Black cats who hiss for seven years at distorted images. Lot’s spilled wife lying beneath the top of a fallen ladder. Syrup of Ipecac dropped in hyrdoxilic, abdominal acidic, autistic, vaults. On a rubbery trampoline, duplicitous confusion. Stalled in time and space. escape from millenniums. Tempestuous winds abrade. A glowing platinum plug in a tight denim pocket. The nocturnal wail of an emergency vehicle. A wire hanger abortion performed with callused fingers. Shorn off limbs. Young flesh kept from life, torn by raptor talons. Composite filaments bond thoughts to fantasies. Subterfuge and games trudge on Euphoria. Impregnated with dubious gloom.
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Poetics: Contrast
Posted by Victoria C. Slotto
Picture Credit from: Advocacy For Animals