Four Brilliance Senryu

Jan 11

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Sunlight

Four Brilliance Senryu

lunar brilliance
what is intemperate darkness
if not the flip side

dancing in color
fabrics shimmer and reflect
chromatic brilliance

brilliance of the grass
blades blaze in radiation
yellow as the sun

a sign from above
brilliance from the heavens
to light up our days

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Written for:

Sensational Haiku Wednesday

This week’s theme is: Brilliance

Also Posted on:

A ray of hope flickers in the sky –  Prompt # 137

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the imaginary garden with real toads
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About zongrik

For those of you who do not know the handle "zongrik," that would be Bat-Ami Gordin. Most people call me "Tammy." Bat-Ami means "daughter of my nation" in Hebrew. It's a heavy name to carry around. I answer to either name. I also answer to "mama." Some Basic Things about me: Animal lover, mom, poet/writer, dramatic soprano, photographer, teacher/tutor, CERT/Technician and, oh yeah, aerospace engineer. I consider myself "The Astro-Poet." To learn more about the origins of the word "zongrik" see whats-a-zongrik?

Posted on January 11, 2012, in Poetry, Sensational Haiku Wednesday and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 8 Comments.

  1. Other Mary | January 11, 2012 at 1:26 pm

    Oh, just what I needed, some sunshine and brilliance! Thank you for this!

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  2. Anthony North | January 11, 2012 at 2:06 pm

    Brilliance and light. A good mixture.

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  3. Untitled Moments | January 11, 2012 at 3:10 pm

    LOVE the picture.. and the flow of this… I really love the way your right brain thinks:)

    ~L

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  4. seingraham | January 11, 2012 at 5:45 pm

    ditto the above comments and more esp “brilliance of the grass
    blades blaze” – my particular favourites

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  5. becca givens | January 11, 2012 at 7:55 pm

    wonderful set — especially like the last one!!!

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  6. Hand4Paws | January 11, 2012 at 8:47 pm

    dancing in color
    fabrics shimmer and reflect. it is true that colors dance before our eyes…the brightness makes them come alive 🙂

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  7. Magdalena Wiklund | January 12, 2012 at 3:42 am

    Is this picture true, or is it made in a computer? If it is true it is amazing!
    Maggie

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  8. Jenn @ You know...that Blog? | January 15, 2012 at 8:18 pm

    Sunshine is definitely what I need right now! Nicely crafted!

    Reply

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