three still haiku and senryu

Apr 21

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Beauty of Japan

three still haiku and senryu

japanese garden
circled by snowy mountains
clench tranquility

still tidal moment
interrupted by a breeze
waves begin to form

fireworks in brain
needing your lips to touch mine
still in love with you

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Written for:

Prompt #134 – still

About zongrik

For those of you who do not know the handle "zongrik," that would be Bat-Ami Gordin. Most people call me "Tammy." Bat-Ami means "daughter of my nation" in Hebrew. It's a heavy name to carry around. I answer to either name. I also answer to "mama." Some Basic Things about me: Animal lover, mom, poet/writer, dramatic soprano, photographer, teacher/tutor, CERT/Technician and, oh yeah, aerospace engineer. I consider myself "The Astro-Poet." To learn more about the origins of the word "zongrik" see whats-a-zongrik?

Posted on April 21, 2012, in Haiku Heights, Poetry and tagged , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 9 Comments.

  1. Chuck | April 21, 2012 at 2:28 pm

    smokin’ hot!

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  2. artmusedog | April 21, 2012 at 2:35 pm

    Warm and wonderful haiku ~thanks, namaste, ^_^

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  3. PranitaBhat | April 21, 2012 at 2:38 pm

    That was very subtle and romantic…! Very nice…

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  4. siggiofmaine | April 21, 2012 at 7:17 pm

    Love this set of three…especially the last verse
    makes me wish for things that could have been, maybe.

    Thank you,
    Peace,
    Siggi in Downeast Maine

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  6. Grace | April 22, 2012 at 5:19 am

    I like that clench tranquility…very nice capture of stillness ~

    And your last one…sizzles with fireworks ~

    http://everydayamazin.blogspot.ca/2012/04/still.html

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  7. Chevrefeuille | April 22, 2012 at 11:48 am

    Awesome! What a wonderful set of haiku. The beauty of Japan I love the most.

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  8. becca givens | April 22, 2012 at 1:16 pm

    Wonderful set — the first is my favorite of your trio. Thank you for sharing with us.
    Day 22 ~~ Moonlit Windows

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  9. magicalmysticalteacher | April 22, 2012 at 4:32 pm

    That Japanese garden is not about to let go of its tranquility. “Clench” tells me so!

    “Shadowed Is My Way…and Still”

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